simon 框架:

​ 首段转述题目+个人立场

​ 给出中心句(有几个原因我支持…/)给出原因,+原因解释+泛例+具体例子/反例,拓展后果(降层拓展)

双边支持

  • While I tend towards the viewpoint that A , I would have to support a limited amount of B
  • on the one hand
  • on the other hand

**1.政府是否应该支持本土电影 (混合类) **

**Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be? Should governments give more financial support to local film industries?**原因+应不应该

me: 原因:首先,人们更喜欢探索未知,新的题材总是能吸引到人们。

政府应该支持本土电影,发展本土电影可以让人们体验到更多的本土文化,可以让人们对国家有更多的归属感,也可以让人们体验到本国的文化底蕴

simon

外国电影大制作,有明星,titanic,ironman,更好看

本地应该得到支持,因为有许多film maker有才能但是缺乏机会,还能给国家增加就业机会,成功的电影会吸引游客

**总结:**我的观点假大空,太空泛,具体到好处

  • It’s true that ..

  • There are various reasons why many person find

  • It’s true that much person favor in work self-employed rather than work for organize

  • There are various reasons why many person find self employed are more enjoyable than work for organize


**2.外国游客是否应该比本地游客花更多钱 (同不同意) **

**Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? **

me:

​ 有些人认为,一些游客来自海外相比本土游客应该花费更多的钱,我完全不同意这个观点。

​ 首先,如果区别对待海外游客,让他们对比同样的体验下,需要花费更多的钱,他们会对这个现象有所抱怨,会影响国家的国际评价,比如,如果来游玩的游客对国家的评价下降,会影响到海外前来游玩的游客数量下降,甚至会让外国人对本国有偏见

​ 其次,让外国游客花费更多的钱明显是不够公平的,前来游玩 的所有人应该享受相同的待遇,而不能存在偏爱,否则就是不公平会激发许多矛盾。

​ 总结,外国游客应该和本土游客享受相同的待遇,而不应该花更多的钱。否则可能会适得其反

simon:

​ 开篇重述题

It’s something argue that … 接观点 I completely agree/disagree

​ 然后提及支持的观点先抑后扬,

the argument in favour of 现象 would be that +原因解释

​ 然后说到如果游客知道需要比本土游客花更多的钱可能就不会来旅游了,距离

To take the 。。。 as an example 举例+结果,

​ However, I believe this to be a very shortsighted view.


  1. 现代社会的人变得更独立还是更不独立 (双方讨论)

    Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other, while others think that people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give your own

    me:

​ 如今有一些讨论关于当今社会,人们是更加独立还是不独立,我将会对两个观点都进行解答

​ 首先,It’s something argue that person become more dependent would be that the life standrad has improved in contemporary society,which means person can deal with all aspects things of daily life by employing others .有人认为,人变得更加依赖是因为当代社会的生活水平有所提高,这意味着一个人可以通过雇佣他人来处理日常生活的方方面面。比如,,由于经济条件的提高,大部分年轻人更倾向与网上点餐而不是自己买菜做饭,这意味着有许多年轻人没有掌握做饭这一项基本的生活技能。

​ 然而,我认为这是一个 shortsighted view. There are various reasons why 现代社会的人是更加独立的。首先,现代社会的人们有更多的机会安排自己的人生,比如大部分人都有机会组织自己的假期出去旅游,这需要自己来处理各种琐碎的事情。其次,现代社会的人们对于就业更有压力,人们为了找到更满意的工作需要更多的hardworking,和self-control,如果人们不是independent,会面临更多的生活压力。

​ 总结,尽管现代社会人们对于一些生活技能有所缺失,但是人们也面临了更多机会和压力使人们更加独立。

simon:(讨论双方)

People have different views about whether


4选择工作最重要的考虑因素是薪水么 (同不同意)

When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration.

To what extent do you agree or disagree? 部分同意:同意salary重要,其他也一样重要

me:

​ It’s something argue that the compensation are most significant in a job.Although the salary are indispensable,the other factors are both essential for emloyee.

​ 在日常生活中,足够的薪水确实是很重要的,for example,由于生活成本的日益提高,人们不得不选择足够多薪水的工作,比如,如果一个人的工作获得的薪水不够支持日常生活,她会有很大的生存压力,迫使她必须寻找一个工资更高的工作,否则他很有可能变成honmeless,相反,高薪工作可以帮助人们保持心理和肉体的双重健康保障,比如如果人们有足够的薪水的工作,那他就必须要为经济情况担心,他可以购买许多额外的想要的物品,让自己保持好心情,当有身体疾病时,也有足够的经济支持得到好的医疗帮助。

​ (I agree that earn sufficient salary from job are key consideration,for example,with the live cost has quickly raise,people have to choose a job base enough compensation to raise his family and have a reasionable life, if someone choose a insufficient job, he might be face to consideably surive stress.Reversely, higher-salary job contriubtes to maintain healthy both psychology and physical,to illustrate,people without financial consideration are capable to affort buying things which he enjoyed can raise happiness,and have ablility to have best medical care to far away ailment and illness.

)

​ 然而,薪水的重要性并不意味着工作的其他因素就不重要了。there are some factors 同样重要。首先,工作的内容对与员工也是十分重要的,如果人们对他的工作感到枯燥,那不仅会下降他的工作积极性,同时还会让人们对生活有消极态度,不想上班。其次,工作的安全性也应该被考虑到,如果一份工作有很高的薪水,但是却有很大的风险造成伤害,那么人们应该深思熟虑的考虑,而不应该仅仅因为薪水而去选择,这样会导致人们的生命安全受到威胁。

​ in conclusion , 薪水的重要性是毋庸置疑的,但是其他工作的因素应该也不能忽视,而应该全面的看待一份工作,挑选到自己满意的工作。

​ When choosing a job, many people believe that salary is the most important consideration. While it is undeniable that a good salary is crucial, other factors are equally essential for employees. In this essay, I will discuss why salary is important but also highlight other factors that should be considered when choosing a job.

​ In daily life, a sufficient salary is indeed very important. For example, with the rising cost of living, people need a job that pays well enough to support their daily expenses. If a person’s salary is not enough to cover basic needs, they will face significant financial stress, which could lead them to seek a higher-paying job to avoid becoming homeless. Conversely, a high-paying job can help people maintain both mental and physical health. For instance, with a sufficient salary, individuals do not have to worry about financial difficulties. They can afford to buy items they desire, which can improve their mood, and they have the financial means to access quality healthcare when needed.

​ However, the importance of salary does not mean that other factors are not important. There are several other considerations that are equally important. Firstly, the nature of the job itself is crucial for employees. If people find their job boring, it will decrease their motivation and can lead to a negative attitude towards life, making them reluctant to go to work. Secondly, job security should also be considered. If a job offers a high salary but comes with significant risks of injury, people should carefully consider whether the high salary is worth the potential harm to their safety. Prioritizing salary over safety can endanger one’s life.

I n conclusion, while the importance of salary cannot be denied, other factors such as job satisfaction and security should not be overlooked. A comprehensive view should be taken when choosing a job to ensure overall satisfaction and well-being.

simon:(讨论双方)

​ as important as =equally important

​ most important = key consideration


5. 动物实验是否应该禁止 (双方讨论)

Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of them because of their benefits to humanity.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

simon:

​ reliable alternatives = equally effective alternative

​ non-medical products

​ medical treatment